Autumn leaves by Phil Dumas

Type: Short story, contemporary

Word count: 1,800

Smashwords rating: 5/5 stars

My rating: 4.5 / 5 stars

A man found the love of his life in a beautiful and clever librarian named Camilla. Although he is very embarrassed, she is very charming and very attractive. When he was dating him, he thought he was the luckiest person in the world. But will happy hours last?

I don't like gorgeous language stories. They are usually dramatic and pretentious. but from

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 This is an exception, because there is a lot of movement and great dialogue between this man and Camilla, and there is a lot of humor. Although it is still too fancy to me in some respects, most of the writing is done well and powerful:

It was the end of autumn; the stunning freshness and enchanting warmth, like Camilla, revived and pure. is her.

No! Really her! There, she sat in a beautiful park and walked into a space that I really hoped to fill.

I walked towards her and still not noticed. The stage is set. The Council has taken away the romantic atmosphere of the leaves, but the background is perfect. Everything is perfect, but because I want to open the lines, I will escape from the scene every time I step.

She glanced at me and took a moment: a photo from my wallet would wash away the leathery skin. I took a deep breath and reached an agreement with God.

The protagonist is so embarrassed, I want to know if they get together is Camilla's plan, she just let men think this is his idea. Which is good for me. When the jealous guy is interested in love, I like it. There are not enough people in romance, I am always happy to read their stories.

I can also see that this man and Camilla are a real couple. His romantic side perfectly completes Camilla's love of medieval romantic literature. Their chemical reactions are very real, and there is no footstep between them, just like a lot of romantic novels.

The only thing I complained about was that the story was coming to an end and Camilla got bad news. It is in the last few paragraphs of the story, I want more. I want to see the consequences of getting news instead of a very sudden ending. Therefore, this story only gets 4.5 stars.

But if you want a short, fast and fascinating reading, I recommend from

Autumn leaves.

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