When you outline your thesis topic in a special way that I will teach you, the level of thought in your paper will not only be clearly organized, but will also attract readers to read the body passage of your paper. ,as well as.
This is a transaction - the key element of the topic sentence is the keyword, there are two types:
1. Core keywords, this is the main idea of your thesis
2. New feature keywords that link your story, examples and reasoning support to your core keywords
Identify core keywords
For example, suppose you are writing an article about salad.
You start to say that most people like salads, and you too. And, like most people, you like a variety of salads, even fruit salads. But your difference is that you can't stand a fruit salad with apples, bananas or pears.
So this is your paper [the core keyword is capitalized]:
Like most people, I like salads and even fruit salads, but I can't use apples or bananas or pears to eat fruit salads.
This is the first topic sentence of the main paragraph that is consistent with the paper:
I just can't use it in fruit salad.
Although the topic sentence does link to the paper with CORE KEYWORDS, it is a rather boring topic sentence, isn't it? Can you understand why? Think about it. Some things are very boring Whennnnnnnn ---Can you think of it? When ?
Ok, this is -- some things are very boring dull When is there? Nothing fresh In it [do you know, right?]. There is nothing new in this topic sentence - it has already been explained in the paper. It has no new keywords to make readers curious about the next step.
Create general new keywords
In order to provide CORE KEYWORDS and the main ideas of the paper, you can add Newness Keywords.
Novelty keywords are universal - that is, they are more general than the details of the stories, examples, or inferences they introduce in paragraphs - and they usually summarize paragraphs. The following two sentences are the preferred alternatives to the above-mentioned deadly dull topic sentences, which illustrate some general new word keywords [ Italic ]:
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I can't stand the apple in the fruit salad --- Anyway, it's not red. .
I can't stand the apple in the fruit salad. Because I used some very bad experiences with apples in different foods. .
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As you can see, by adding some general information as Newness Keywords, you tell your readers what details will appear in the paragraph. The first example shows that the paragraph will say "not red"; it may seem concrete, but it is not very specific because we don't know which "red" is quoted or why.
The second example shows that you will reveal the "bad experience" that makes you dislike apples in fruit salads. However, we know again what specific "bad experiences", so this is a universal. Those new word keywords make these topic sentences more interesting because they appeal to readers who want to read and find details and interesting details.
Novelty keywords are the secret to attracting readers' curiosity.
Combine CORE and Newness keywords in topic sentences
When you combine the new word keywords with the core keywords in the topic sentence, you can relate to the main ideas of the paper and suggest interesting details in the following paragraphs, as you will see in the following three examples. That's it.
Example #1. from
This is a paper that supports an overview of topic sentences. The outline shows the use of specific core keywords [CAPITALIZED] and general new word keywords [ Italic ]:
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paper
After my parents, I was actually very close to my father in terms of emotion, social and financial.
An overview of the topic sentences that appeal to readers
Despite the divorce, my feelings towards my father are getting closer Because now he lets me talk to him about important things like boys.
Although he is not there every day, my father is now socializing with me. I like to go to "dates."
Most importantly, my dad's financial approach It's better now, he bought me a lot of interesting things and gave me more money than before divorce.
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You have already heard that "a picture is worth a thousand words" - well, a good example is also, I think the above example says a lot. So I'm just telling you sentences that don't have the Newness keyword on the theme, letting you compare and see how the Newness keyword helps increase the enticing interest:
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Despite the divorce, I am getting closer to my father emotionally.
compared to - -
After the divorce, I am getting closer and closer to my father emotionally. Because now he lets me talk to him about important things like boys.
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Although he is not around every day, my father is now socializing with me.
compared to - -
Although he is not nearby every day, my father is now socializing with me. I like to go to "dates."
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Most importantly, my father's financial approach is better now.
compared to - -
Most importantly, my father's economic way is better now, He bought me a lot of interesting things and gave me more money than before divorce.
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Quite interesting difference, isn't it?
If there is no Newness keyword, the reader will not be interested in reading. But with the increase in general new keywords, readers are motivated to discover ---
- what The "important thing" she talks to her father, especially because it suggests that one of the things is "boy" - whether you are a man or a girl, you may be thinking: Ok...... May be juicy , Even this is an article ... You will never know ... I will check it out...
- how is it like She would say "dating" - maybe some of the upscale restaurants you've ever heard, or some concerts that only fathers can't afford, or maybe a concert island in the Grand Canyon or Disneyland or the Cayman Islands. Many possibilities... May be worth reading to find out....
- what "Interesting thing" is her father buying her now? And he gave her More money Do more than before he divorced? I don't know you, but I'm Interested in listening to specific details, especially if those Really are "interesting things" and just how much is it He is giving her now...
See what I got?
Example #2. from
Examples of this student are CORE KEYWORDS and Novelty keywords It also explains how to attract readers to read interesting details:
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paper
I will never guess riding a noise, dirty city bus will teach me to relax, get a better grade, and appreciate the humor of people.
An overview of the topic sentences that appeal to readers
That NOISY, DIRTY CITY BUS teaches me to relax Because I finally realized that there are not many curses that can be rushed.
After learning RELAX on BUS, I started. I often learn French while riding, which makes me my French angel. And GOT me a lot of Better grade In French .
I feel the humor of people by taking the city bus. By showing me a lot of stupid personal drama.
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Of course, learning to relax on the bus is an annoying thing, but the first topic suggests that there is an interesting story about the curse. Can provide some interesting phrases... maybe a bit shocking and interesting to read....
In the second topic sentence, a familiar old idea that does not cause any excitement other than taking a bus may have some expected silver lining, but Better grades Because of these...? ! what is that angel Related matters? ! Hmm... there may be some hints that might be interesting or even useful...
The new word keywords in the third topic sentence also look tempting, suggesting "a lot of stupid personal drama." Some interesting stories will be told in the next paragraph or two...
Example #2 again shows the usefulness of the Newness keywords and the clarity and interest they can bring to your topic sentences, while focusing on the main ideas of the paper.
Example #3. from
This is another example of using topic sentences to outline support for the paper and to make the reader's curiosity flow:
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paper
Because during my sophomore year, my head coach and my criticism, I found an unexpected motivation to become a secretary, as my practice, my secretary business school and my first job show.
An overview of the topic sentences that appeal to readers
because of her, More than two years I practiced The wrist I developed is almost as strong as my sports brother. .
Since my NASTY TYPING teacher graduated from a local business school, I got my school there just to tell her - I did it!
Finally, I got my first secretary job, About twice as much as she did - I skillfully let her know about it .
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In the first topic sentence above, "because she" summed up from the paper "because of the hateful criticism of my typing teacher." One reason for this is that the first topic sentence follows the article's paper, as usual, so we can easily see this connection. This may not apply to any other topic sentence because they are too far away from the paper.
The Newness keyword in the first topic sentence makes us look forward to learning how strong her wrist is... Can she beat her brother now? ... seems to be a little away from that direction... want to know what it is... think about it, I will find...
The new word keywords in the second topic sentence also evoke our curiosity ...how she managed to show the nasty typing teacher... and was ready for this little guy. ....
The third topic sentence uses Newness Keywords to let us know the last blow to...
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